well man, this is really a masterpiece.
from a merely visual point of view, it captures the eye because of its complexity and amount of detail. i think i could look at it for hours, and still something would escape to view. And, despite the number of small particulars, this image doesn't look messy. it has a sort of symmetry, in its shape and in the bending of the writings, that helps the eye in the complex task of traveling through it.
the poem is deeply meaningful "per se", but the way the verses are scrambled in the images, adds something to it, since this reveals that most of them have an inner meaning which makes them autonomous and singularly inspiring. this makes me think to dadaism, even if i'm aware that it is more extreme in its way of dealing with texts.
zooming out back to the visual aspect, we can see here a medallion, a cameo holding the portrait. this adds imho a third element of value to your creation.
definitely one of your best pieces so far.